*sits for half an hour and waits for it load*

Anyway, while the piece is humungo and all that annoys me so, the details in the planets are quite lovely. They look pretty real to me. Better than any planets I ever did, thats for sure. I don't like the smallest planet so much though. The glow of it is just way too much and overpowers it a lot. The glow on the other planets don't look too bad, maybe a little less and they'd be prefect.

I'm loving the detail you've managed to create on the planets surfaces. That's pretty awesome. You can see they have atmosphere too, which is always a bonus. Nothing like a planet that looks totally boring and like it's really all that real (I know all about those things). I think, I think, since you have set this at critique encouraged, I'm just going to give you all that I think.

First, the small planet needs an edit, or needs to go completely. The other planets are fine. The purple stuff (I have no idea what it's meant to be) doesn't need to be there. I think this needs a starfield, as well.

Thats just my honest two cents worth for you

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Thanks for actually taking your time to look at my work i slaved for along time making this.. the last planet was supposed to be more moon like and i was goin to throw in a comet.. but meh its late and i didnt want to be up all night rendering. Thanks for your insite and i will remember to read up on our reply for when i next make something.

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Okey the little planet is yuk >_<

It needs less glow and more detail like the other two. Also the other two could do with having slightly less or slightly darker glow on the dark side because basically less light would be refracted off the surface.

The two large planets are really great. They look like photos. Seriously.

The blue attampt at a starfield or gas cloud or what-ever needs to be completely redone. Gas clouds and star systems are less thick and more, umn, cloudy. It looks like you had a nice gas cloud constructed and ruined it with a plastic wrap filter. It would also be nice to add a few tiny stars here and there to make the picture look less blank.

Anyway the two big planets are fantastic and good luck to improving. I hope I helped and this is just my opinion kay ^^

im not keen on the glowiness, but the detail of the planets and the cloudy thing in the background kick ass.

IM still learning

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and youre doing a good job

dont ever stop learning

thats wicked!!!!!!!!!! and i must say, it was worth the hours it took you to do, because the detail is extraordinary, and i love it!!!!!

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The Shadow off the planets seem 2 split... the colour change is 2 "suddenly different". There seems 2 b an error though... u know the side of the plant where it i engulfed by darkness; the glowing aura still can b seen... Is that meant 2 b the case? Because it seems weird with an aura encompassing the darkness...Nice planet aura's though. Tried making the dark matter more of a blue hue?

LoL... I know nothing about Celestial Beings... So don't take my comment 2 deep; considering I'm only 15

Nice idea n position of the planets *thumbs up*

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looks nice, but it's too much glow around the planets, and also the glow's colour looks a bit unnatural to me, maybe it'd look better with a blue closer to the sky's blue.

that's so beautiful~
wow
i am in awe of the beauty that you hav created
*bows down and worships you*

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